Not bad at all. It reminds me a bit of old flash game music or old trance/house songs. I particularly like the drop as it suits the name of the song since it gives me that spacey feel. Great work.
Not bad at all. It reminds me a bit of old flash game music or old trance/house songs. I particularly like the drop as it suits the name of the song since it gives me that spacey feel. Great work.
Thanks!
I quite like the melody for this especially the parts at 0:15 and 1:45 since it has a bit of a nostalgic feel to it. I feel like you could make the beat have a bit more of an impact like the buildup for 1:45 is okay but when it drops it's just a slower version of the buildup. The beat could also be louder as the melody is kind of overpowering it. I also think that you maybe could add some more sounds to make the song be a bit better since it's mostly just a melody and the same beat. I hope this helps you to improve your future songs.
Thanks for the feedback . I will surely use this to improve my future songs!
Not bad! I feel like the vocals could be improved but they are okay as the guitar makes up for it. I like how this sounds like a battle theme or a credits song for an anime or game. I also really like how it gives a feeling of betrayal as it's the type of the song that makes you remember what they did to you. Overall, a good song.
It was the first time I used vocaloid. So... Something like that
This is beautiful. The title fits the name of the song perfectly as it sounds like when you remember something you deeply regret and wonder what would've happened if you didn't do what you did. Overall, the song gives you the feeling of emptiness and regret. It's nostalgia but instead of happy memories it's the sad ones instead.
My God, I didn't expect such a score/review haha :D you made my day! I was actually wondering whether you'll like this tune. It will be part of a bigger release titled "Slow, Slower, Doomer". It will contain:
A1 The Abovehuman
A2 Signals and Thoughts
A3 Pwatamowing
B1 Pwatamowin (Mikulski's Remix)
B2 Doomtronica
B3 Tunnel To Nowhere
Thanks once more and have a nice day!
This sounds really nostalgic as it reminds me of some old basshunter songs and also reminds me of old trance songs that were in flash games. I don't know whether you intended to go for a nostalgic feel but if you did then you absolutely nailed it. Amazing work!
That's right. Im all for the oldschool basshunter style. He and DJ Splash are the reason I started making music in 2011 / 2012! Glad you like it :D
Great song! Certain piano parts remind me of Robert Miles children and I love how it matches the name of the song and tells a story as well. I could see this being used in a film or game. Amazing work
Thanks for your comment!
You got it, some parts are inspired by Robert Miles Children / Fable. I made this song for a Manga I use to draw when I was 13, an old dream..
Amazing! It really suits the name of the song. The different drops and buildups are the stages of drowning as the beginning is the person swimming but at the end it is the person's heartbeat as it slowly stops.
Thank you for noticing those details :)
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